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TO madam Taninta and Mr Mohamed

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Post by Guest on Fri Jan 25, 2013 6:49 pm

Thank you both for answering and your kind words...Madam Tanita your
piece of advice were of great help to me thanks million times ..and
sorry not to reply sooner than it sould be...
at the moment Im
writing the preface to my magazine and I want to show it to you both for
any addition (becaouse I think it should be longer). remarks or
suggestion to make it better as much as it can
......I took expressions and ideas from the net since I ve never wrote a preface before .....here it is;


It gives us a great pleasure to release the first edition

SUNSHINEwas born to the
initiative of *******
Secondary School pupils to
celebrate the Knowledge Day, April the 16th.
Meanwile it is written to encourage
our pupils to learn, speak and write using English

SUNSHINEincludes simple and
interesting articles that have developed
specific subjects regarding different fields.

On the behalf of the magazine’s contributors. I would like to express our
thanks to all English teachers of ***** Secondary school who provided a real support and assistance and all
pupils who have partially contributed to the magazine which would not be completed
without their help.

We would like to receive any comments or suggestions
that could assit us for other editions.

thanks in advance for your help I ll appreciate any correction or addition from any one


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Re: TO madam Taninta and Mr Mohamed

Post by tanita on Tue Jan 29, 2013 6:39 pm

Dear englishteacher,
I am glad that I could help you a bit with my advice,but I disagree with you concerning the length and the content of your preface that I simply think is perfect.

I've got just two suggestions:

Isn't it better to say :

was born out of.../
speak and write English /
contributed to the creation of the magazine

Feel free to ask about anything for I appreciate your passion for teaching and learning as well !

Keep up the good work and it would be great if you could share with us the final result of this amazing work you are doing with your team.

Happy Teaching


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Re: TO madam Taninta and Mr Mohamed

Post by Guest on Tue Jan 29, 2013 9:24 pm

thank you madam;for help ,advice and support.
I took your remarks into consideration.

Inchaallah ....Im so eager to finish the work and share with you all.


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Re: TO madam Taninta and Mr Mohamed

Post by Mohamed on Sat Feb 02, 2013 8:33 pm

Ohhh! Sorry for the unintentional neglect of the thread. I'm always in endless struggle with the net provider and the computer I have. I always lose the last topics / replies when there is a sudden disconnection then connection in the are where I live. I do apologize , sir (In case I were "Mohamed" you addressed ^^ )

The introduction is so attractive. Nevertheless, the source of your material is tp be mentioned/introduced . As Mrs. tanita mentioned above, the length of any piece of writing is not a barometer of its conciseness or effectiveness. Thus, never care of how much you write but how much you express your ideas effectively with the least efforts and sentences. Do care for the right (correct and coherent) use of English as it reflects who you (you as a teacher and your students) are. Bear in mind that oral language disappears as soon as the speaker ceases speaking/leaves whereas the written one remains as loonger as the scrpit survives. Keep up motivated and motivating. Respectfully, Mohamed.

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thank you Sir

Post by Guest on Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:38 pm

Yeah...thank you sooooooooooooo much for answering Mr Mohamed .
1* No need to apologize..I was sure that you didn't answer for a reason .
2* you can adress me as Mrs.
3* you said: the introduction was attractive" you mean the first lines of the preface or the preface as a whole.and if you 're talking about just the first lines ,what about the other lines.
4*you said also :"you should mention the sources of the material"I need more clarification ...I tell you why? because..for he magazine I designed the work as follows:
the most gifted pupils ,I asked them to write poems and short stories of their own.
the other group was of excellent pupuils but they are not interested in writing.I chose for them different fields...science.literature .sociology ..etc and asked to bring articles of common concern..........may be here is the problem....now sure they will take the articles from the net ...Am I supposed here to mention the site within the articles...or instead I write Chosen by mohamed mohamed for example or collected to you by mohamed mohamed...I wanna make my students happy by feeling that they had really done some thing...you understand this

thanks in advance Sir ...


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